Former nerd turned rich and handsome as an adult buys a sexual exchange for three-quarters of a million dollars from a woman he's had a crush on since they attended middle school.
Takes less than an hour to read. He's arrogant and controlling. Her character could use more development.
"I saw he lighted candles" - lighted is almost always an adjective, lit is the preferred verb. Items such as this, and the extreme lack of dialog tags, make it seem like the editor was inexperienced.
The erotic scenes are heavy with detailed order, but low on emotion. The actual devirginising is short and told from only his point of view.